http://oculture.disqus.com/NoneenMon, 03 Mar 2008 13:02:12 -0000http://www.openculture.com/2008/03/a_new_media_scholars_dilemma.html#comment-21002438<p>Ouch! So much for trying to hit a colloquial tone. Point taken, Jenny--I've fixed the sentence. I'm not as dumb as that made me look, I promise.</p>Ed FinnMon, 03 Mar 2008 13:02:12 -0000http://www.openculture.com/2008/03/a_new_media_scholars_dilemma.html#comment-21002437<p>"As a graduate student in an English PhD program,"the author should be able to catch and correct a dangling modifier when he commits one, especially in his first sentence. I didn't read on.</p>JennyMon, 03 Mar 2008 07:59:49 -0000